How is my english? i don't think its all that good?

Watch your spelling of there their and they're. You have some punctuation errors.. quotations and parenthesis, especially in the paragraph that starts with "the author".. and you need to watch run on sentences and using the same word twice in the same paragraph. You shoul'd never start a sentence with "And" even if it is in quotes.. I would start it as So and so states, "And viewers...." etc.. Your English is great, just some grammatical errors. Good luck!